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The Writing Workshop


On the first day of actual writing, I was so used to the expository essays that were so structured and dull; I didn’t even think I could write in any other format. Once I go comfortable with the writing style of the week, I would focus on writing my story or poem before any other class’ homework because I was so intrigued. The exercises we did in our notebooks were really helpful. They sort of broke the ice for the writing ideas to flow.

The assignments that were challenging were the best ones. The weeks we had to write an A-Z story and the postcard story were structured enough so that there were boundaries but there was still enough space to write about infinite things. It’s like a dog in a fenced in backyard versus a dog on a leash. I like having just enough limits because otherwise I can’t think of a good prompt. …I hope writing is included in my future career because this class has made me a better writer and I learned that I really enjoy it.

-Sydney Miller, 9th grade student


The writer's workshop in the way I intend it here is much like college writing courses.

After students have submitted 4-5 drafts, they choose their favorite and revise, type, and turn in. They do not include their names on the front.

Then, the teacher takes the collection and selects about 1/3 of the pieces and makes copies of a packet for the students.

This packet become the reading material with the sole intention of helping the writer's piece.

Students read each piece once and then write their general thoughts on the bottom of the page. Then, they read each piece again and make editing and revision comments and suggestions.

The next day the class gathers in a circle and the first piece is read aloud. The writer is not allowed to speak or say who they are. The conversation is then open for everyone to discuss the paper.

After the paper has been fully discussed, the students write their names on the top of the paper (to show they critiqued it) and turn it in. They should have their notes written all over it.

We ask if the writer wants to raise their hand and if they do we ask if they have any questions or what their thoughts were. This is a time to clarify any confusions. Sometimes the author wants to remain anonymous and that is okay too.

I provide points for their comments and I make sure all are appopriate. Then, the next day I give the writer back their papers with comments.  Students love it.  

The point is to eventually --by second semester-- be a fly on the wall and let the students control the conversation.

The following documents explain in richer detail and the workshop works best in a model that has been using writing and sharing productively all year. Consider coming to a workshop of reading Simple Solutions to get a deeper understanding of how these tie together.

Handout for students with Worskhop Rules

 

 

 

TIP

The first workshop is never as successful as the ones that follow. Don't give up after the first one. Too many people do this. If you hang in there and do it a second time you will see a big difference in the quality of the work and comments. Students understand how the assignment is shown to others and what that means to them and they adjust.

 

 


 The Writer's Folder

All drafts and important grammar lessons, rubrics, etc. can go into this folder. Use it also as an idea generator. The first time you hand them out have students spend 10-15 minutes drawing images, making a timeline of their life. This gets the creative juices going. Then, tell them to choose one image or moment and write about it. Here are some things you might want to keep in the folder for reference in addition to all their drafts:

One Page Grammar/style issues 

Ideas Rubric

Student Version of Six Traits Rubric

Proofreading Marks